tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3254507.post115224294853870140..comments2023-08-27T11:42:44.824-04:00Comments on Straddling the Century Line: Because I couldn't resistDani In NChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15032707452740200776noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3254507.post-1152677742910332962006-07-12T00:15:00.000-04:002006-07-12T00:15:00.000-04:00Oh dear. Now I sound like a critic, and I do hate...Oh dear. Now I sound like a critic, and I do hate that...as I really don't know what I'm doing but it was just a feeling I had...anyway, both do convey that scary part of a relationship where we easily take each other for granted...and that's something to think about! <BR/><BR/>I do like January's idea to put both away for a month and see how what works then. A very good idea! <BR/><BR/>And it makes me so happy that something I wrote inspired someone else...that is a gift! I will remember it on my cloudy days...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3254507.post-1152616178230920252006-07-11T07:09:00.000-04:002006-07-11T07:09:00.000-04:00Thanks for your comment on my blog - i loved readi...Thanks for your comment on my blog - i loved reading your stuff - looking forward to getting back here and reading more good writing.<BR/>Btw my ABM stands for Able-Bodied Man - a little silly really ... :)Kay Cookehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01791873464409271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3254507.post-1152373447398214712006-07-08T11:44:00.000-04:002006-07-08T11:44:00.000-04:00i love the second stanza!i love the second stanza!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3254507.post-1152274430411436072006-07-07T08:13:00.000-04:002006-07-07T08:13:00.000-04:00Hmmmm. I like both versions but I'm leaving toward...Hmmmm. I like both versions but I'm leaving toward this one. It's sassier, just a different flavor. <BR/><BR/>I like the end rhymes and the last stanza especially. <BR/><BR/>Try this. Put them away for a month and then revisit them and see how you feel about both of them.Januaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.com